Hello i'm kirsty and you may know from before, well anyway i'm here to comment on your blog. when i saw this i was like wow he knows how to persuasive write. I enjoyed the description. Did you think about putting a bit more words in? Why did you write this? Anyway i have to go comment on more blogs, blog you later.
Hi lachlan its Jesse here I like your thing but who did this you should make a person that did it and maybe do the end like last seen on a boat to kill the people that were driving so he could get away so he didn't get to go to jail. blog you later!!!
Hello i'm kirsty and you may know from before, well anyway i'm here to comment on your blog. when i saw this i was like wow he knows how to persuasive write. I enjoyed the description. Did you think about putting a bit more words in? Why did you write this? Anyway i have to go comment on more blogs, blog you later.
ReplyDeleteHi lachlan its Jesse here I like your thing but who did this you should make a person that did it and maybe do the end like last seen on a boat to kill the people that were driving so he could get away so he didn't get to go to jail. blog you later!!!
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