On friday we had a big water fight.
me and my Friends played tag.
i was in den we got aot and den we
all had big water flight
i skwt everywan.I love it ( :
me and my Friends played tag.
i was in den we got aot and den we
all had big water flight
i skwt everywan.I love it ( :
Be Lachlan.37
that was a fun day wasnt it
ReplyDeleteHey Milla here yes the water fight was very fun yes but one thing is that maby just work on you wirting bye .
ReplyDeletei't was a day wasnt it
ReplyDeletei like it lachlan
ReplyDeletegood job locin from lukas.
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ReplyDeleteHi lachlan it is lacie. this is good but i think next time you should add more things. Maybe next time you should use spell check.
ReplyDeleteyour picture that you got
ReplyDeleteand you did not sell then right
Hi Lachlan, good job on the image and also the big letters so people could read well if they cant see well. You could work on your spelling and change den to then so people can understand your writing better. This reminds me when the seniors did the water fight and then I keep squirting Ethan H while his water gun is empty of water and it was really funny. Anyway good job
ReplyDeleteHi lachlan my name is Ethan H and i from Te ropo manawaroa and your doc i think is really good but there is a few mistakes in it and my favourite part was when you said you played tag with your friends.Maybe next time put more info about you docs and maybe check your spelling but that's basically all so ill blog you later!
ReplyDeleteHi,Lachlan, it's Hunter here. I like the picture you have inserted to the post. This reminds me of the day. Some advice is to write a little bit more on what you did. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletesup your post is great
ReplyDeletebut you need to chek your spelling